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Tuesday, September 1, 2009

tuneless tuesday

Musicless Monday bleeds into Tuneless Tuesday. Thank goodness for the karaoke machine in my closet! I honestly don't know how people existed before the invention of music; did they beat on rocks with mammoth bones?

OK: Some excellent things going on today. I was thoroughly impressed, for example, by the P2P conferences in CW this morning: very focused, very together, very directed. Several of you didn't even want to stop when the period was over! And the comments that you wrote on the board as most helpful varied from grammatical to stylistic to content-building to miscellaneous; obviously there was quite a lot of variety in the commentary and conversation. Great work!

Tonight, CW-ers, revise the piece you conferenced today. Use color-coding; don't forget both the color key and the draft declaration telling where your focuses were in the revision. (Both should be at the top of the page.) Also don't forget about updating your WS, which you should do each time you work on anything.

E3H-ers, we had another good all-class conference (though this one was, I think, mostly me) in 2nd P, and two more in 5th. I hope that each of you took something positive away from them; we'll be doing a session of in-class P2P conferences tomorrow before returning on Thursday to our regular literature programming. ;-)

Tonight, you should examine your Frozen moment piece to see if there is anything you wish to revise at this moment and make whatever revisions you see fit for tomorrow. (Note that revisions should be color-coded; see CW notes above.) In addition to that, there are two more things:

  1. procure a three-ring binder for use in writing workshop, and
  2. go to the Workshop Summary link on the class page; read what this is and set one up for yourself; email me a copy using the subject header WS (date)

E2H-ers, I hope that the "class conference" we held today made some sense, even if it was not on one of your pieces. (We'll rectify that situation tomorrow.) ;-)

Tonight, try creating your own "frozen moment" piece: freeze a single sparkling moment of your summer and show it in all of its sensory glory. Maybe it sparkles because it was incredibly wonderful; maybe it sparkles in your mind because it is dripping with metaphorical gore. Who knows?

You know what else I don't know? I don't recall what video I said I would try to look up today in E2H. Darn. Sorry about that. Here's something chosen at random:












J: frustrated music: Dancing Clouds Over Oak Creek--Alexander

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